Fandom: Captain America (the new one)
Characters/Pairings: Johann Schmidt/OFC
Rating & Warnings: non-con, torture
Notes: this is not a romance fanfic, I am not even sure if porn with out plot is a an acurate label, it focuses on this unhealthy dynamic between the OFC (French Underground member) after getting on Schmidt's wrong side.
I really like to get it done by xmas. So far I am in 3000+ words. I need advice on pacing, maybe some feedback on how well I present the dynamics and grammar.

I am going to cross post this my journal with a few snippets of the story, so you can see what you are getting yourself into.