A beta-reader, if you please!

EDIT: Beta found!

Fandom: JoJo's Bizarre Adventure
Characters/Pairings: Bruno Buccellati/Leone Abbacchio
Rating & Warnings: Teen and up audiences, no warnings
Estimated Fic Length: ~4,000 words when completed
Notes: Set post-canon/post-Vento Aureo, the two are reunited in the afterlife and Bruno decides to finally make a move. The only problem is that Abbacchio's ex-partner keeps getting in the way.

Aside from the usual spelling and grammar checks, I'm also hoping for feedback on characterization and story flow, if anything needs to be fleshed out more, etc. This is my first time writing Bruabba so I'm not sure if I've got their voices quite right.